“Say what you need to say,then leave.”
Seth Godin’s words today on his blog intigue me. A lot. His blog is wonderful. If you haven’t discovered it you should. Great insight, wisdom, and just plain good stuff there.
My heart crosses the concept of narrative and story often. I am reading “The Story Factor” by Annette Simmons, the full title of which is “Inspiration, Influence, and Persuasion Through the Art of Storytelling.”
In it is a stirring quote from Jim Harrison, “The answer is always in the entire story, not a piece of it.”
Yesterday’s sermon focused on Isaiah 40:21-31, our story, our life’s narrative. And God, He plays a major role too. As He thankfully does. And did in the sermon. Its a good thing, right. (There is already a back story raising its not-so-ugly-head here. You may want to go to the archives of the blog to read of my love for Him and some of my Christian “story”.)
So much to gnaw on. And I love stories. I seem to learn well when story is used as a tool.
I seem to remember events when there is a story woven like silken threads through a snapshot of life. Is that what story is? Isn’t that what Jesus did when he told parables. Very brief. Very powerful. Very important.
But what of the back story? The parts thinly veiled or left untold. What of the living that lead up to the event?
Are we left to wonder, to guess, to write a narrative around the unknown parts.
“Say what you need to say, then leave.” I love the one, two bunch of the brief. The potency and power in the short. In the very intense, undiluted telling. The concentrated strength of the brief.
Is this why I love the poetic.
Is this the beauty of poetry? Isn’t this the beauty of poetry?
Can the backstory show up in poetry in a way unique to the poetry format.
There is a beautiful backstory to these pictures, of my daughter, taken by The Patient One.
I want to tell you the story.
I think I’ll write a poem. But knowing my bent toward longer forms, maybe I’ll go write a proem, entitled “Salt” because that is why the beautiful winged-one lit on the beautiful girl-child.
It was all because of the salt.
Have I been salt to someone today?
{Will you come back tomorrow to hear more on story, the beginning the middle and the glorious endings. It’s really our life narratives. And aren’t they beautiful?
My heart is about to burst wide open to tell a beautiful one of a man I know. Its his story. It is beautiful. And I will ask permission to tell it this week. What a glorious story he is having? How is your story going.}
Counting gifts with Ann at A Holy Experience dot com.
Today as I think of writing my “Salt” poem, being brief when I write (because your lives are busy and you may not have time to ready the longer posts), and as I dream of how to tell the story of my friend which my heart bends into because it is an adoption story. I have a particular fondness for adoption stories, did you know that?
….. I am counting gifts, quietly, because you may have places to go, people to see, and a story to live.
Go live it with an extra dash of “salt”. I hope I will see you tomorrow.
Linking with Laura at Laura Boggess dot com and Michele at Michelle DeRusha dot com
And L.L. Barkatfor In On And Around Mondays
Beautiful….
I love adoption stories too- and may I encourage you that if a story is good- I will read it no matter the length….. so don’t hold back- go full throttle and tell the whole story. I await in eager anticipation 🙂
ps- I find what you write is so good that I can never have enough.
Hunbled here. Deeply so. Look forward to your eyes and heart here again. Wishing His Grace, Elizabeth
Can I say that there is so much power in that ONE word for me? Thank you, friend. There is so much in that word.
i love what you said here, and so agree! Want to check out that book now, and to come back here for more. That photo reminds me of a split second today when I was pulling up to an intersection. Something blew gently across my windshield – at first I thought it was a leaf, then saw. A butterfly monarch…and it seemed to hover, like a hummingbird might, for just a second…then flew off. It struck me for some reason. Just the way it looked suspended in air for a moment extra…
Pam, it is such a pleasure to have you here. Thank you for your kind words. What a gift. These butterflies are amazing, gentle, beautiful, and purposeful. I could watch them for a long forever.
Love butterflies, and the back story, although I find it hard to convey in a brief blog post…thanks, Elizabeth, and blessings 🙂
I am not sure I will ever get to a place of “brief”. Thank you so very much for your time spent here. I can feel your gentle presence on these pages, Dolly. Blessing to you, on the wings, on the wings….Elizabeth
Today our Sunday school lesson was on being salt and light. So I must now go read the backstory…
Laura, thank you for your kindness. I will embrace you on your next visit. Your presence here blesses. Love this community and you are a big sweet part.